Rare Find
a thatch of boughs
yields a sight of doe,
clayish of fur in the dim,
as if i had snuck back
to some stone-age place,
near a living pottery shard.
how was the lost pot made, i wonder?
what nucleotides wallowed
in the original mud?
few traces now
of grass-swelled swards
prowled by smilodon.
i’d ask the doe
but we speak different senses:
is she the last survivor
of an antediluvian trust?
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7/30 "wallowed" replaces "romped"
7/25/22 "romped" replaces "frothed"
7/23/22 various word changes again... "frothed" replaces "waltzed"... "antediluvian" replaces "ancient, shattered" .. etc ...
7/21/22 "what nucleotides waltzed in the original mud?" replaces "which nucleotides shaped the original mud?" ... "shattered trust" replaces "ancient, shattered trust"
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