Glass Pitcher
swoops of glass
swerve down upward
weightless without falter,
inward-turning-outward
nimble of mood to spout
with elemental ease,
curves of sculptural water
which tango akimbo
limb-to-waist,
so many beguiling
illustrious crystal phantoms,
so much visual, abundant
invisibility.
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9/26 ... rearranged the stanzas to avoid a rhyme-trap. .. + all commas for fluidity
7/20/25 .. didn't really capture anything of the pitcher,... sad...
7/31/24
Aug 7, 22
... "nimble of moods"
... changed a period to a comma

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