Edge
smidgeons of sunset,
the day’s canopied dregs,
leach through the sigh-breeze
of cat’s-cradle boughs,
their epitaph crowned
by the faintest first strokes
of a night heron.
soon
not an ember
of adumbral pink tints the west,
nothing but the hover of Hesperus,
regal and impervious,
uncatchable,
above the abyssal crook
of the lean boughs.
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4/12 ... removed a word
4/11 ... changed a prep, "abyssal" replaces "abysmal"
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