Wary Forest
slip under a boulder
near a poker face of snow.
this wary forest,
it must know something,
spruce lichened with odd smiles,
needles sensitive as goosebumps.
mice-like feet of wind
scurry through the treetops.
clouds equivocate
with their suspicious, mutable heads.
a hibernation of centipedes
tucked in coiled dens,
sentinel such frosty secrets,
and yet most of all
sunlight seems the sly butler,
winsome through the boughs,
cheerful almost,
too much sparkle in its face.
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6/21/24 .. a few mods... "sly butler" .. the idiom of the guilty bulter 'the butler did it'
12/12/23 ... totally rewrote this poem again ... absolutely reconstructed. still doubt it is any good. how can I tell when I can't even trust myself?
11/20 ultra-significant mods, including taking the first stanza and making it the fourth stanza. (yep)
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