Bitten
the moon
had been bitten down to a nimbus
on a stoic cloud and now
it was almost an animal
but no one wanted such scars,
and so the moon
became succulent with wounds
to taunt its critics
and the hypocrties,
and it played hourglass
with the calculative schemes
of our splenetic human rush,
and became
something to be feared yet prayed,
to be chased after as we overworked and underfed,
lost in our self-made riddles of erosion.
it embraced oceans
until they suckled its silky light.
it became a sickle
for sparkles of heaving midnight harvest.
some say
it was the first tool, before stone,
before pestle, before weapon,
high over mountainous hearts,
where
it somersaulted and pranced
to stir hope with magic,
and sow various flourishes
of ineradicable joy.
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3/15.25 ... brutal poem, hard to work at all
6/21/24 solsticed
11/13... changed the "sickle" phrase
11/10 more edits, hoping for excellence through neurotic fixation
11/6 ... "played" replaces "it was the". Fixed typo in second-to-last stanza
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