Sunday, April 21, 2024

Poem: Late Hike

 

Late Hike

 

ants of sweat plod over my wrists.

cars flee quickly by, in pursuit of shiny colors.

a nearby foothill, brushfire-sooted,

gawks from the granite taffy-machine of time.

 

no mercy from young heatstroke.

the valley i walk 

orbits a bright black hole of vultures.

dust disguised as lizards disguised as dust 

shuffles stones over my leathery feet,


stones that could be stone tablets 

whose hidden, cryptic etchings ask:

 

“where are the begets and the laws? 

where are the ezekiels and the daniels?

where are the lamentations

and the ecclesiastes?”

 

 sidewinders, even they get lost in this cauldron,

amid simmery bubbles of sunset 

and ladles of shadow full of illimitable heat.

surely this is some recipe of long sacrificed creatures.

god and the devil, 

all sustentance, knowledge and code,

gone to broth.

 




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10/25/25.. keep trying.. 

9/7/25.. god this poem is ugly

4/26 ... "broth" replaces "motes"

4/22 ... more mods, added "granite" ... "motes" replaces "specks" ... "wrists" replaces "flesh" ... more mods mods mods

4/21 ... lots of edits hour after posting, should've waited...  shame













Took lots of hikes in my 20s and 30s, many outside of the San Fernando Valley.  Santa Susannas.  Santa Monicas.  San Gabriels.  Verdugos.  Even a simple canyon annihlates the urban.  Such as Tujunga.  Sometimes the trail died and I relied on a compass, or my familiarity with the land--and its familiarity with me.

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