Tuesday, July 25, 2023

Poem: Not So Still

 

Not So Still

 

fingers of breeze,

flirty cool flames,

 

they immolate air,

flicker over jaw across lips

behind lobes

 

to trickle my nape 

and pool in dips

where throat marries shoulder.

 

spine nipples abs

a navel whirlpool-possess,

hex across my ass,


my penis and testicles,

 

back of knees,

a song from calves 

down to savor toes,

gone!  


invisible genie 

of erotic smoke.





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11/26 ... very difficult to flow it

1/30/24 mods

11/1/23  ... mods to the last line

8/11.... mods to make the poem more honest

7//26 ... "marries" replaces "joins" ... removed a word

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