Not So Still
fingers of breeze,
flirty cool flames,
they immolate air,
flicker over jaw across lips
behind lobes
to trickle my nape
and pool in dips
where throat marries shoulder.
spine nipples abs
a navel whirlpool-possess,
hex across my ass,
my penis and testicles,
back of knees,
a song from calves
down to savor toes,
gone!
invisible genie
of erotic smoke.
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11/26 ... very difficult to flow it
1/30/24 mods
11/1/23 ... mods to the last line
8/11.... mods to make the poem more honest
7//26 ... "marries" replaces "joins" ... removed a word

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