Ochre On Beige
rolled like dough for years,
leavened by slaps of foam,
illusory yeasts of brine.
this scattered stash.
bits of towered treasures
left over when prosperity caved.
see the solemn,
weathered, wind-whipped
fragments and structures,
not-so-piquant now,
on a plateau of the broken:
crushed idols.
nuggets of castles.
eremites on salted piles.
a chartreuse crab
fat as a silver dollar
ambles over stubs of rubble
once picturesque.
bladderwrack flogs them.
a pillory of gulls
swoops to berate.
a single pure rectangle
half lost in anonymous sand,
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4/8 took out an adjective
1/1/23 more changes later in the day ...
1/1/23 massive changes to the crap awful poem
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