Bricks on Beach
rolled like dough,
leavened by bubbly combers
and yeasty slaps of brine,
these scattered stashes
of once-towered treasures
left over when prosperity caved.
sullen, pitted, wind-mocked,
not-so-modern now,
this plateau of the broken:
nuggets of castles, crushed idols,
eremites on weathered shards
of barnacled piles.
a chartreuse crab
fat as a silver dollar
ambles over the stubs.
bladderwrack flogs them.
a pillory of gulls
swoops to berate.
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6/20/24 ...edits
4/8 took out an adjective
1/1/23 more changes later in the day ...
1/1/23 massive changes to the crap awful poem
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