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night falls till there is no dark. each star fluid as a child's stare in a glitter-spark waterfall of sundrops swept by a wetfire of leaves. a crossroads where larkowls perch on Hesperus and Phosphorus. where bees foam mothy in noon-merged witching hours, and Phoenix pirouettes with Nightingale. earth-rich roots curl wispy through a twilight of meteors and strutful comets.
Beginning. This End. Now.
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10/26 lots of eds ... I don't like this at all .. this is so not fun
7/26 meh..
9/19/25 ... changed a word
8/5/25 Satre's no exit has nothing on this
7/19/25 ... more playing around... brutal reveal of inability
2/19/24 ... super difficult poem, should never have wrote it
2/2/24 ... mods
10/1 .... took out a word
8/18 ... took out a word
5/21 shortened second phrase
5/6 "to" replaces "in"
5/3 significant mods a couple hours after posting
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