Whispers
hungry ladder of ribs
not guarding a name,
it climbs itself,
rummaging where arteries once thrived,
a fragment of a lover,
a figment of some fond past,
a wisp of caress.
breezes breaches the skull,
swirl upon swirl,
until an eye socket remembers
when two people
wonderfully misbehaved.
but the breeze kicks up,
whiffles and gusts,
scatters.
nothing left
but whispers. whispers
from a cracked, chalky pottery
of vanished face.
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10/26 heavy, heavy heavy mods... (changed title b/c another p. titled "restless")
5/8/24 ...
2/9 "slept" replaces "once slept" ... "matters" replaces "matters now"
2/7 "past" replaces "gone" ... "crumble" replaces "last crumb" (the sound of a single word can wreck the whole thing, just like in music) ... "vanished" replaces "lost"
2/6 ... "time" replaces "place"

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